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ravenblanc
08-23-2008, 11:27 PM
here
is choice
no thing forbidden
no questions
or their answers hidden
no need for soul maps
through the eye
touch..heart has felt
mind cannot deny
here.

here
no search
for golden grail
abandoned
though it does not pale
having thirst
what does one drink?
the water..
not the grail, i think.
here.

Bard
07-06-2009, 06:48 PM
Interesting piece raven.


a bit of complexity interwoven I'd say.....

I hope to see more some day.

ravenblanc
07-09-2009, 07:29 AM
I always appreciate you taking the time to read and hearing your thoughts,Bard. :flowers
No, no more..it's done...that's all she wrote.

Bard
07-09-2009, 10:23 AM
I always appreciate you taking the time to read and hearing your thoughts,Bard. :flowers
No, no more..it's done...that's all she wrote.

May I be so bold as to ask why?

You need not answer if you like,
Simply state id rather not answer :laugh

Bard
08-31-2009, 08:25 PM
I always appreciate you taking the time to read and hearing your thoughts,Bard. :flowers
No, no more..it's done...that's all she wrote.

I was not refering to more verses or stanzas
but was hoping to see more poetry Raven :winky
Just to be clear :happy

ravenblanc
09-27-2009, 07:29 AM
I was not refering to more verses or stanzas
but was hoping to see more poetry Raven :winky
Just to be clear :happy

You are right..there are no more verses to this piece,Bard.
And whle I appreciate your invitation to post more poetry it seems the quill is mired in muddy waters of late,and when prodded to move leaves only a trail of self indulgent crap..

Should the situation change you shall see it here at the Poetry Pavillion first. :flowers