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Mr. Lemon Pocket
09-27-2005, 05:11 PM
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wintertao
09-27-2005, 05:18 PM
I liked this.

The poem for me got weaker as it went -this free verse
game is all the rage now and you gotta hit hard

Mr. Lemon Pocket
09-27-2005, 05:20 PM
Free-verse is the rage for all the right reasons, creative freedom. Although it brings many casual posers, its worth it for the gems.

thanks for reading

wintertao
09-27-2005, 05:22 PM
freem verse is all the rage for many reasons - creative freedom is just one

Poodles
09-29-2005, 12:38 AM
Some thing in your words brought beauty and love in to me-Thanks-Love this poem :rahrah