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Bard
01-15-2006, 04:54 PM
Private Streams



Private streams
Pools of moss
Childhood lockets
And memories lost

Little League home-runs
Boys in the band
Schoolyard scirmishes
Buried in blurred bland

A moment, a lifetime
Run together as one
A flicker, a glimmer
A shimmering of sun

An afternoon backdrop
A boy, park and sun
A streak of lightning
Trails in sun


R.E.B.

salsa
03-09-2007, 10:04 PM
interesting..... :tiphat

Bard
03-19-2007, 10:20 PM
Interesting, naw, just my life

in four stanzas

Thanks for kicking it up man

i enjoyed rereading it

Bard
09-30-2009, 05:25 PM
Private Streams



Private streams
Pools of moss
Childhood lockets
And memories lost

Little League home-runs
Boys in the band
Schoolyard scirmishes
Buried in blurred bland

A moment, a lifetime
Run together as one
A flicker, a glimmer
A shimmering of sun

An afternoon backdrop
A boy, park and sun
A streak of lightning
Trails in sun


R.E.B.

I saw a guest reading this piece
when i clicked on the unfamiliar title, i was startled to find it was mine
i renember little of what i write
and in some cases, such as this, it is interesting to revisit it (the piece)
and the words years later.
i enjoyed this piece, a lot!


If I was going to edit this
I might change the last line to

'Trails & Memories undone'

Or just ...
'Memories Undone'?

Bard
05-04-2010, 04:21 PM
Bump, because I saw a guest reading it, and after rereading the piece, I too,
deem it worthy of another trip down the hill