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InfoNut
10-03-2005, 07:50 PM
Children are born
Scared beyond belief
Every day couple content with life
wait, something’s wrong
Reassuring her
Tests diagnosis
Researching, learning
The death of dreams
Proactive with therapists
Soul withering regressions
Learning the law, learning the system
3m, kneeling in the yard howling for what might have been
Professional Advocate
She begins to withdraw
Autism specialist, appointed to councils
Dying inside, drugs
Known throughout the community
She leaves
Valiant single dad, admired.
Crippled and alone
Finds new love! Match made in heaven!
Depression still rages inside
Fiance abndons, cruel, vicious
Shotgun


All Fall Down

Bard
10-03-2005, 11:06 PM
Wow.

Thanks....

Tis all I can say.



Rod

Poodles
10-05-2005, 07:21 PM
:tiphat --Thanks-A very powerful and moving Poem-I enjoyed the way you interwove and structured your piece.A fabulous -well crafted Poem.