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Mr. Lemon Pocket
10-03-2005, 10:33 PM
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Bard
10-03-2005, 10:57 PM
She wore glasses
and I
drank from them.

"And I drank from them"

Very, very, nice damn line.

Mr. Lemon Pocket
10-04-2005, 06:48 PM
Thanks much. I leave that as a poem in itself rather than a line of something bigger, because thats all i need to say on the subject of that girls eyes. All that needs to be said i guess.

So you know, i read all of yours posted here, but i'm not the best commenter, just so ya know i read and appreciated.

Bard
10-04-2005, 08:09 PM
A line that good is a poem, tale, and tribute in itself.

It should have stand alone showcase in my opinion.

I too comment little, I understand.

And thank you for taking the time.

genuinebandit
10-05-2005, 10:44 AM
Very nice little three-liner. I agree with the Bard.

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