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Mr. Lemon Pocket
10-03-2005, 10:33 PM
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She wore glasses
and I
drank from them.
"And I drank from them"
Very, very, nice damn line.
Mr. Lemon Pocket
10-04-2005, 06:48 PM
Thanks much. I leave that as a poem in itself rather than a line of something bigger, because thats all i need to say on the subject of that girls eyes. All that needs to be said i guess.
So you know, i read all of yours posted here, but i'm not the best commenter, just so ya know i read and appreciated.
A line that good is a poem, tale, and tribute in itself.
It should have stand alone showcase in my opinion.
I too comment little, I understand.
And thank you for taking the time.
genuinebandit
10-05-2005, 10:44 AM
Very nice little three-liner. I agree with the Bard.
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