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DammitEdna
11-30-2006, 10:28 PM
death numbs

though expected, still stuns

a close to my memories

the last chapter, slammed shut

The end of what could have been

and what never was.

Bard
11-30-2006, 11:22 PM
Well done Edna....well done.

DammitEdna
12-01-2006, 05:47 AM
Thanks Bard.

Bard
12-01-2006, 05:21 PM
Edna...


I felt it was an honest piece, therefore worthy of the recognition and applause.

salsa
12-01-2006, 06:07 PM
I think all poets have touched this subject at some point in their lives and you you did it with a creative pen I have not read b4...well done indead.