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Matthew1128
10-15-2005, 12:38 AM
A ray of light
In a cold dark place
Carved out to hide the fear

Dirty Walls
Broken Floor
No way out.

Melting Pride
A stony face turns soft
His hand across my heart

A light so bright
I could not see my shame
You left me breathless.

Grace that steals my pain
A love that destroys my hate

You are here, you surround me
I hear my name
Skip-a-beat
And I Witness you.



This poem was written to be read out loud.

Bard
10-15-2005, 11:17 AM
Jamie..

Nice lines, nice piece

Nice flow

I enjoyed

mirage
11-03-2005, 05:15 AM
Hi Jamie.

Lovely flow and imagery. A well crafted piece
I enjoyed very much.

Shelley