View Full Version : Looks good on paper

11-20-2007, 09:08 AM
I love you just rolls across the page
warms the soul
brightens the eyes
makes the skin blush pink
will you go with me
check yes or yes
looks good on paper
so sweet so charming
makes the heart soar
Until death do us part
how romantic
an eternity of bliss
that again looks
so good on paper
but comes up so empty in life
you will not love me
you do not wish to know me
you just desire
I look good on paper.

11-21-2007, 04:43 PM
nice close - made me smile at the end

fun read


11-21-2007, 05:00 PM
Charming title and piece

Fun read indeed.

11-23-2007, 03:52 AM
haha yeah a sarcastic piece -made me laugh writing it. Took me all of 2.2 -just like a commercial break lol!