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salsa
12-12-2007, 04:30 PM
you sound
like an arm & hammer
1950's assembly line
we aren't near
bright enough
to see
we are two of a kind
intense
smoking pot all day
leave the stems
for someone else to find

~w

Bard
12-12-2007, 06:54 PM
Good piece.

Great Arm & hammer line.

salsa
12-12-2007, 08:56 PM
thanks

my writing has been very weak lately

this one is ok i suppose

I like it ok

meery Christmas

Bard
12-12-2007, 11:56 PM
I liked it more than Ok.

Merry Christmas to you Salsa

Wanna
12-13-2007, 12:09 PM
excellent visual Salsa. Much better piece than you think. Honest.
forgot to add yeah I like it and yeah I agree with Bard, that arm and hammer assembly line-
that rules.